game-dev actually sprinkled some interesting spoilery crumbs a lil down below!! Quote: "Yes,Aron and Seth are romance interests but in the new update I will introduce another one,making it three ^^"
Thank you for your comment and criticism !I am very glad that you enjoyed the artstyle and took your time to play the game!I hope you have a great day ahead^^
Technical errors: Sometimes it doesn't show us who is talking they just appear as grey text without name. Dunno if it's on purpose. Also Aaron's sleeping picture appeared when Mr.J was mad at us lol. Also after i picked the choice where i declined Aaron to draw me and after Agni left the game stopped as in it brought me to the Main Menu
Either way Aaron is by far my favorite ^^ Gotta love the cheerful kind. I kinda have the feeling tho that he is somewhat acting and maybe even be the craziest lol
I like Seth too he is confident, serious and can be funny with his disses but his family speech kinda made me feel a little bit meh about him. There is one thing being oblivious like Aaron but he kinda sounded hm ignorant that's probably just his stern expression tho. Regardless he is still great so far having a somewhat harmless opinion i disagree with doesn't change that. I also had to chuckle when we "Bro-zoned" him
And Agni dunno if they are sarcastic or not but if she actually hurts old people then she can go in the thrash bin lol. Making so much fun of Aaron was also kinda weird. But maybe that was your intention with her.
I think it's nice so far it kinda reminded me of Cooking Companions as in with the sometimes tense mood with the characters (not referring to the panic attacks)
Thank you very much for your comment and opinion!I will definitely fix errors in the new update and maybe change some dialogue lines to make it more clear.I am very happy you enjoyed Aron and some other aspects!Thank you for your support and time:)Have a great day!
I think the game is okay Agni really got on my nerves a lot, and I found that there were a couple of typos and a few times the background was acting weird ((I got Aaron's sleeping CG in the middle of the laughing part with Seth. I'm uncertain if that was intentional or not.)) It was also difficult to discern whether or not a person was talking or if it was inner dialogue; this is because of the changing font colors and the name on the notepad not showing up at times.
Thank you for your comment!Since it's my first game I am sure there are some problems.If it's not hard may ypu please tell me where they are so I could fix them later? Thank you!
Hello! I apologize for my late reply. I was busy taking screenshots of any moments which occurred to have a mistake: Typo, odd CG, incorrect font color, and improper grammar. There are many things that I have taken note of by analyzing the text and imagery. Which is why I present to you my discord, ((removed)) . This message would drag on for far too long if I noted *every* small detail I found.
This image happened to show up both times I replayed this scene. As I have stated in my previous message, I am uncertain if this was intentional or an error.
Improper spelling and grammar
"I try to speak up using all my strenght" I bolded the word which was misspelled. Additionally, you may also see that there is no punctuation.
There are other occasions that I have found to have minor mistakes, such as these...
The font color does not indicate someone is speaking, however, Seth later replies to this 'inner dialogue'. This implies that it was spoken aloud.
When Agni is speaking to the Protagonist, she is portrayed to be a teasing and smug character. It wouldn't come to be a surprise if she used slang while speaking, although, I find that the words are not similar to slang such as "t'is" or "it's". Furthermore, it has become apparent to me that this game often makes mistakes such as leaving out punctuation. Hence why I believe "t's" is a typo.
Pardon me if I come off as arrogant or possibly even rude. I do not particularly have experience with criticizing others, but I do have a strong desire to inform people of my personal opinion on some matters.
No !Not rude at all! Thank you very much for Pointing out the mistakes!I will try to fix them in the new update! Also thank you very much for taking your time to look for them ,it was very nice of you!You are a great help!
This is such an interesting dating sim, I love the mixture of humor and mental health issues in this dating sim. I find myself relating to the MC a lot, and I can't wait for the continuation of this game!
The main character is way too relatable wth It was like I was reading a book on my life in a game. The only difference is I have no romance interests or routes I can take in real life lmao.
I am glad that you found them relatable. I wrote based on my feelings and experience as well .I am sure your life routs await you but for now I hope my game will fulfill their place in your life^^
Thank you very much for your comment !I am very happy you liked it!Yes,Aron and Seth are romance interests but in the new update I will introduce another one,making it three ^^
Woah! You're totally feeding us well!! :DD I wonder, will the new RO be the mentioned by Agni mysterious someone who MC supposedly was dressing up for? he-he
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This sounds interesting !
This game is so captivating, I'm eagerly waiting for the next update
Thank you for uploading this demo, I LOVED it !! I can't wait to see more of your game !! Thanks again for your work💕
tell me why do I relate so much to the MC 😭😭😭😭
I really love the demo! Keep up the amazing work!! I can't wait for the full game to come out! <3
is this still in development, luvs? thank u in advance for response ^^🌸
Thank you for your comment!Yes,unfortunately it is !But I am working hard on it !
thank u for ur hardwork !!! ><🌸
I LOVED this game, and I'm so excited to see more. I just wish there were socials linked to this account so I could see more of the development.
Out of curiosity, will there be more characters?
Also! I absolutely adore the title screen. It is so cute and comforting in a way.
game-dev actually sprinkled some interesting spoilery crumbs a lil down below!! Quote: "Yes,Aron and Seth are romance interests but in the new update I will introduce another one,making it three ^^"
I relate to the MC to an extremely concerning amount with the intrusive thoughts.
dont even play with me this was AMAZING I love all the characters and their personalities!!11!! I cant wait for more! <3
Such an interesting game!!! Really love characters. Can't wait for the update
PS: English is not my native language, so sorry for the mistakes
I love Seth omg I love the freaking game hopefully you keep updating the game its rlly cool :D (seth oddly looks like steve jobs)
Thanks for your sweet comment!Nooo now I can't unsee ittt
Thank you for your comment and criticism !I am very glad that you enjoyed the artstyle and took your time to play the game!I hope you have a great day ahead^^
Semi Spoiler:
Technical errors: Sometimes it doesn't show us who is talking they just appear as grey text without name. Dunno if it's on purpose. Also Aaron's sleeping picture appeared when Mr.J was mad at us lol. Also after i picked the choice where i declined Aaron to draw me and after Agni left the game stopped as in it brought me to the Main Menu
Either way Aaron is by far my favorite ^^ Gotta love the cheerful kind. I kinda have the feeling tho that he is somewhat acting and maybe even be the craziest lol
I like Seth too he is confident, serious and can be funny with his disses but his family speech kinda made me feel a little bit meh about him. There is one thing being oblivious like Aaron but he kinda sounded hm ignorant that's probably just his stern expression tho. Regardless he is still great so far having a somewhat harmless opinion i disagree with doesn't change that. I also had to chuckle when we "Bro-zoned" him
And Agni dunno if they are sarcastic or not but if she actually hurts old people then she can go in the thrash bin lol. Making so much fun of Aaron was also kinda weird. But maybe that was your intention with her.
I think it's nice so far it kinda reminded me of Cooking Companions as in with the sometimes tense mood with the characters (not referring to the panic attacks)
Thank you very much for your comment and opinion!I will definitely fix errors in the new update and maybe change some dialogue lines to make it more clear.I am very happy you enjoyed Aron and some other aspects!Thank you for your support and time:)Have a great day!
Love the game. A few typos here and there but hey nothing I can't complain too much about.
Love the characters and how they look! I can't wait to learn more about them in the future!
Thank you very much for your nice comment! I will try to correct typos in the future!Have a great day^^
I think the game is okay
Agni really got on my nerves a lot, and I found that there were a couple of typos and a few times the background was acting weird ((I got Aaron's sleeping CG in the middle of the laughing part with Seth. I'm uncertain if that was intentional or not.)) It was also difficult to discern whether or not a person was talking or if it was inner dialogue; this is because of the changing font colors and the name on the notepad not showing up at times.
Otherwise, it's an okay game 👍
Thank you for your comment!Since it's my first game I am sure there are some problems.If it's not hard may ypu please tell me where they are so I could fix them later? Thank you!
Hello! I apologize for my late reply. I was busy taking screenshots of any moments which occurred to have a mistake: Typo, odd CG, incorrect font color, and improper grammar.
There are many things that I have taken note of by analyzing the text and imagery. Which is why I present to you my discord, ((removed)) . This message would drag on for far too long if I noted *every* small detail I found.
This image happened to show up both times I replayed this scene. As I have stated in my previous message, I am uncertain if this was intentional or an error.
Improper spelling and grammar
"I try to speak up using all my strenght"
I bolded the word which was misspelled. Additionally, you may also see that there is no punctuation.
There are other occasions that I have found to have minor mistakes, such as these...
The font color does not indicate someone is speaking, however, Seth later replies to this 'inner dialogue'. This implies that it was spoken aloud.
When Agni is speaking to the Protagonist, she is portrayed to be a teasing and smug character. It wouldn't come to be a surprise if she used slang while speaking, although, I find that the words are not similar to slang such as "t'is" or "it's". Furthermore, it has become apparent to me that this game often makes mistakes such as leaving out punctuation.
Hence why I believe "t's" is a typo.
Pardon me if I come off as arrogant or possibly even rude. I do not particularly have experience with criticizing others, but I do have a strong desire to inform people of my personal opinion on some matters.
No !Not rude at all! Thank you very much for Pointing out the mistakes!I will try to fix them in the new update! Also thank you very much for taking your time to look for them ,it was very nice of you!You are a great help!
This is such an interesting dating sim, I love the mixture of humor and mental health issues in this dating sim. I find myself relating to the MC a lot, and I can't wait for the continuation of this game!
Thank you for your sweet comments!I am very glad you liked the game and can relate to the main character!I will try to update as soon as possible:)
The main character is way too relatable wth It was like I was reading a book on my life in a game. The only difference is I have no romance interests or routes I can take in real life lmao.
I am glad that you found them relatable. I wrote based on my feelings and experience as well .I am sure your life routs await you but for now I hope my game will fulfill their place in your life^^
Thank you so much and I will definitely be playing the full game when it drops.
this is honestly so good!! i came on here to view game but this one caught my attention and im glad it did :D
aron and seth got me feeling some type of way tehe
(THIS HAS BECAME MY NEW HYPERFIXATION --)
You don't know how happy it makes me knowing that you liked it!Thank you!Knowing my game is a reason for someone's hyperfixation is such an honour !
Such a cool game! Am I right to assume that it has 2 routes with Seth and Aron as romance interests? 👀
Thank you very much for your comment !I am very happy you liked it!Yes,Aron and Seth are romance interests but in the new update I will introduce another one,making it three ^^
Woah! You're totally feeding us well!! :DD I wonder, will the new RO be the mentioned by Agni mysterious someone who MC supposedly was dressing up for? he-he
haha,I am trying to make everyone well-fed!I don't want to say anything now but you will find out soon!
so cute, im excited to see how things continue! <3 keep up the great work! i like aron a lot, such a himbo!
Thank you for your sweet comment!I am very happy you enjoyed him^^He is one of a kind haha
Uwaaa, its good
Thank you!You are very sweet!!
This is interesting!!! I can't wait to see more!!! Aron is baby omg-
Thank you very much!!I will try to update soon!And yes he is !
Of course!!!! Take all the time you need!!! You're amazing!!! ^^
Thank you very much!You are too kind^^
oooo hes in the brother zone
The hardest zone to get out from....